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    What is it that dwells within
    My aching heart, life akin
    What is it that compels me now
    Fighting with my better judgement
    How is it you do these things
    Pulling on my heart string by string
    Why is it you can make me feel
    My cold emptiness, with warmth revealed
    Why is it you come through for me
    When often time I don’t deserve
    How is it I know the answer
    Yet have spoke the words before


    EDIT MY POEM!
    MAKE IT GOOD
    I really wish that we could actually show the pictures in here...

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    heres one i call it vivid dreams

    I see your face in these clouds but i forget this is my vivid dream.Vivid dreams thay are so colorful and lovley.How did you get this beautiful face this must be one of my vivid dreams.Vivid dreams they are so colorful and lovley this must be true because i really love you and i want to be with you my beautiful girlfriend.Vivid dreams are the best but the real thing is you and its better try that one it works all the time you mught have to edit a little bit though

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    Don't know what ya have in mind, but let me see what I can do...

    revised version follows...

    What is it that dwells inside
    My aching heart? Perhaps my pride
    Compels me; takes my common sense
    and holds my judgment in suspense
    As you pull upon my heart
    Each tender tug tears me apart
    Why is it you can make me feel
    My emptiness? Your warmth reveals
    The icy soul, the chilly wall;
    And once again, it shatters, falls
    Why is it you come through for me?
    So many places you could be
    Do I deserve you? The answer's here...
    As close to me as you are near
    Why must I have to ask anew
    This question when the answer's...you...


    (And I thought drummin' was tough, bro'...I am NOT responsible for what follows next...)
    keep the beat goin' ... Don't keep it to yourself!

    Charlie

    "If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." --Henry David Thoreau, "Walden," 1854

    "There's a lot to be said for Time Honored tradition and value." --In memory of Frank "fiacovaz" Iacovazzi

    "Maybe your drums can be beat, but you can't."--Jack Keck

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    nice were all poets i guess lol

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    Here's one of mine:

    Oh how my thoughts of you linger
    Our love can be restored if you pull my finger.


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    Quote Originally Posted by drummer
    Here's one of mine:

    Oh how my thoughts of you linger
    Our love can be restored if you pull my finger.

    Hehe!!

    I've never seen a purple cow
    I hope I never see one
    But I can tell you any how
    I'd rather see than be one

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    By George, I think I'll mash all of those together

    no actually, i started over

    My icy soul cold as steel
    Emotions hidden behind frozen walls
    But through you the warmth reveled
    The walls of ice shatter, fall
    Your eyes your laugh and smile
    So kind, gentle and astute
    Your humor alone would be worthwhile
    These qualities that allow my emotions to take root
    And two more traits that none are above
    And these are your faith and love

    So those girls on the forum...
    Would this be any good?

    Guys opinions welcome too.
    I really wish that we could actually show the pictures in here...

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    I eat my peas with honey
    I've done it all my life
    It makes the peas taste funny
    But it keeps them on the knife

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    lol. I'll just pretend like i was never here.
    Band: System of a Down
    Song: Atwa




    Current: four way independence

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    i think it would work not 100% sure but try it you have nothing to lose

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    ok well i wrote it out really nice and drew some stuff around it (im an artist too yay)... and just incase, $16 box of lindt (white, her favorite) chocolates.

    so that should be fine. unfourtunatly i now dont eat lunch for a week
    I really wish that we could actually show the pictures in here...

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    nice touch very nice that should work

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    expensive taste huh

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    well yeah, but shes definatly worth it
    I really wish that we could actually show the pictures in here...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daemon
    ok well i wrote it out really nice and drew some stuff around it (im an artist too yay)... and just incase, $16 box of lindt (white, her favorite) chocolates.

    so that should be fine. unfourtunatly i now dont eat lunch for a week
    Sounds cool, bro'...actually, your original was quite good....as I commented earlier, it's tough to read another dude's mind...

    keep the beat goin' ... Don't keep it to yourself!

    Charlie

    "If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." --Henry David Thoreau, "Walden," 1854

    "There's a lot to be said for Time Honored tradition and value." --In memory of Frank "fiacovaz" Iacovazzi

    "Maybe your drums can be beat, but you can't."--Jack Keck

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    ill say

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    Yes!!! It went way better then i could have ever hoped, she absolutely adored the card/poem. Chocolates to of course. She was so happy. She ran up behind me and jumped on my back while hugging me. At first i thought i was being jumped, and nearly flipped her of, but i didn't, THANK GOD!
    I really wish that we could actually show the pictures in here...

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    congrats you too gonna go out soon which poem your or mine or one of the others

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    My icy soul cold as steel
    Emotions hidden behind frozen walls
    But through you the warmth reveled
    The walls of ice shatter, fall
    Your eyes your laugh and smile
    So kind, gentle and astute
    Your humor alone would be worthwhile
    These qualities that allow my emotions to take root
    And two more traits that none are above
    And these are your faith and love

    taht one
    I really wish that we could actually show the pictures in here...

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    good choice very good and again congrats

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    This was my first Valentine's Day being single in twenty-one years, and just like Christmas I'm putting all of the money I saved into my drums. It was a little lonely, but a lot more peaceful. Congratulations to all of you who had memorable Valentine's days.

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    thank you hope your next one isnt as lonley

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    It's not really about being lonely timp, I don't really subscribe to the whole, you have to get a date for valentines day thing. I prefer not to do whole public displays of affection.

    HB58
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    you sound like my ex its spookey let me hear about it on my page

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