a NEW SONG!

[amputechture]

Hey All!

Amp here

OK so most of you know I have a band (see below link "The Torpedo Identity") But I've always that yearning to do a bit of singing and such. So I recently recorded a song of my own, with bass, drumming, vox, and guitar. I'm not much of a singer, but like I said it always has been a dream of mine.

Any comments would be nice and well appreciated. Thx drumchat!

The song is called "Catch ME" and it's in 5/4 timing.

here's the link:
www.myspace.com/ampedforwho

Lyrics:

Verse:
Sayin' that I will find my way/
I've been hurt too many times to trust you'll lead me straight/
Tryin' my own paths instead/
Until I realize without you, I'd more than dead/

Chorus:
And here I am in that place/
Knowing that I'm wrong/
I plead forgiveness/
A second chance is all I want/
I know I've thrown my spears/
And they've been thrown at me/
I throw myself at you/
Catch me, Catch Me/

Verse 2:
Maybe there are some things I don't get/
But if I don't keep trying then they'll be nothing left/
Sometimes it's hard for me to comprehend/
That I leave reality, but still I won't be dead/

Chorus

Bridge 3x:
Calling to the power of the night/
Singing to the voice of the morn/
I can see the heavens in sight/
Together you and me will soar/

Chrous 2x

[vinnysimmo]

Good song but its a bit too emoish and whiny for my taste.

[amputechture]

ok cool

anyone else

[PerpetualFrog]

sounds good, but i agree with VINNY

-PerpetualFrog

[hellsbells58]

Good work on all the tracks and it was recorded very well. Can't say I'm a huge fan of the song as a whole, but the production and musicianship is second to none.

Good job amp.

HB58

[someguyplayingdrum]

Not bad amp. It is Emoish, but I don't think its whiny. Keep singing, you'll get better.