Good song but its a bit too emoish and whiny for my taste.
Hey All!
Amp here
OK so most of you know I have a band (see below link "The Torpedo Identity") But I've always that yearning to do a bit of singing and such. So I recently recorded a song of my own, with bass, drumming, vox, and guitar. I'm not much of a singer, but like I said it always has been a dream of mine.
Any comments would be nice and well appreciated. Thx drumchat!
The song is called "Catch ME" and it's in 5/4 timing.
here's the link:
www.myspace.com/ampedforwho
Lyrics:
Verse:
Sayin' that I will find my way/
I've been hurt too many times to trust you'll lead me straight/
Tryin' my own paths instead/
Until I realize without you, I'd more than dead/
Chorus:
And here I am in that place/
Knowing that I'm wrong/
I plead forgiveness/
A second chance is all I want/
I know I've thrown my spears/
And they've been thrown at me/
I throw myself at you/
Catch me, Catch Me/
Verse 2:
Maybe there are some things I don't get/
But if I don't keep trying then they'll be nothing left/
Sometimes it's hard for me to comprehend/
That I leave reality, but still I won't be dead/
Chorus
Bridge 3x:
Calling to the power of the night/
Singing to the voice of the morn/
I can see the heavens in sight/
Together you and me will soar/
Chrous 2x
Last edited by amputechture; 03-11-2007 at 06:53 PM.
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Band Website:
The Torpedo Identity
http://www.myspace.com/thetorpedoidentity
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Good song but its a bit too emoish and whiny for my taste.
ok cool
anyone else
MY KIT: 5 Piece Westbury, Remo Ambassador Heads and Remo Muff'l Rings on all drums, Sabian AA 20" Metal-X Ride, Zildjian ZXT 16" Rock Crash, Pearl 14" Hats, Pearl 18" Crash Ride, Wuhan 12" China
Band Website:
The Torpedo Identity
http://www.myspace.com/thetorpedoidentity
http://www.purevolume.com/blacksunn
sounds good, but i agree with VINNY
-PerpetualFrog
Good work on all the tracks and it was recorded very well. Can't say I'm a huge fan of the song as a whole, but the production and musicianship is second to none.
Good job amp.
HB58
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Not bad amp. It is Emoish, but I don't think its whiny. Keep singing, you'll get better.
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