Just write about whatever. Stuff that makes you angry is a good idea cos then you have a emotional conection to what you are writing about.
Just write about whatever. Stuff that makes you angry is a good idea cos then you have a emotional conection to what you are writing about.
i say when it comes to writing, write whatever comes to ur mind. when u try to restrict urself on what to write u'll never get anything done. writing is all about freedom of expression. just like vinny above said, write about whats keeping u down at the time. that usually brings tha best outta most writers.
take nirvana, lots of his music doesnt make sence, but its what was on his heart, not anyone elses. Id love to write songs, If i knew how.
The Nirvana style of writing was dead simple.
Here's what most of them are about:
1) An idea or experience that you want to write a song around.
2) Begin to explore this idea and conjure up metaphors for it.
3) Get the idea and stick it in the chorus.
4) Write music to go to it!
Well, they did this in reverse but meh...it works, take Smells Like Teen Spirit. There's mention of 'little tribes' and stuff referencing teenagers and all that, and then the chorus says both lyrically and musically what the message is - we're rebelling or something.
If you want to write a story though, like Dani California, you should plot out what you want to write. Then you tell the story...like a bit for each verse. If you have 3 verses, write the beginning for the first verse, then the middle for the second verse, then the end for the third verse. The chorus again celebrates the meaning of the song. Dani California appears to follow this structure; The whole 'Gettin' born in the state of Mississipi' bit, the bit in the middle where she's robbing and stuff, then the bit at the end where she meets her match. The chorus is celebrating the story, which is nothing more than a story celebrating her life - there's no message in it.
Call me pretencious if you want for writing that but that's just what I notice when I read the lyrics...
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that was actually explained really well, thanks Frog.
Wow...thanks for that, that's what my lyrics always look like anyway o_O
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It's a cliche, but "write what you know" is what I've always heard.
Simple as that, but, bro', it can become pretty complicated...
good luck, and...
keep the beat goin' ... Don't keep it to yourself!
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A very different explanation from the ones so far it seems...
But as for me, it depends on the genre you're doing, using the right emotion is the key.
When I write death metal I write about things that make me angry, like government oppression, when I write black metal I focus on dark and twisted subjects like tragedies. Then, whatever your subject, I break it down into a story, figure out form what perspective it is told from, who is good and evil from that perspective.
It's also important to use symbolism, whatever the story is dont just tell it, dont be direct about your purpose, but represent what you mean with something else. For example in black metal it's common to reference the middle ages to reflect on the subject.
The least important thing really is the rhyme and meter, but I try to get it right because it drastically improves how the song sounds when vocalised. Using iambs also improves the flow, and a unique rhyme scheme can be interesting.
That's what works for me, hope it helped you out somewhat. Here's some of my stuff if you think it would help you http://shadows-of-chaos.deviantart.com/gallery/
Waltz around the room, with a glaze in your stare.
In your tuxedo suit. I'll give it a name. Lower
defenses. I'll lower the casket. Open the door.
Open the grave. Murder. Now you're doing the waltz with your murderer......
Waltz around the room, with a glaze in your stare.
In your tuxedo suit. I'll give it a name. Lower
defenses. I'll lower the casket. Open the door. Open the grave.
Mediocrity is the killer.
You find yourself helpless. Christ is not a fashion,
fleeting away. fashion...
Then for the mid 8
He laid emeralds in her eyes, oh but I'd
already tried. a bracelet made of gold and scarlet
thread around her wrist. and everything was wrong so we
sang sentimental songs. Oh how seldom we belong but
how elegant our kiss. and we painted crooked lies but we
danced in perfect time to a love so much refined, we
know not what it is until like a dullen wine we pour
into a grief we know before but it's never quite like this. never quite like this.
All I know now is regret, it follows like a silhouette
along the cobblestone behind me, but has nothing to
say except to innocently ask, a voice as delicate as
glass, "Do you see me when we pass?" but I continue on
my way.
Thats the song :P Its one of my favorite songs its beautiful. Prolly the best one normajean ever released.
Dont just write what you think... Write in metaphor.... Good metaphors :P Otherwise you get boring clogging music.
I call it clogging because thats what is clogging the music industry.... People payed to pump songs out like battery hens. There is no thought and feeling into it. Thats why i love what i love. Albums are released every 3 to 6 years with my bands......
I find it best to not write while your happy either (Unless your extacticly happy). It seems to come best right after you been hurt by someone or an event has touched you.(It could be more for my genre too)
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My post from 2 days ago never showed up, what the hell?
What I do is think of a theme, come up with a short story representing that theme, and use symbols to represent the story.
First of all it depends on your genre, it's important to get the right emotions involved. When I'm writing a black metal song I use some dark aspect of human nature like deception, and when writing death metal I use anger to my advantage with a theme like oppression. You want to write the emotion into the lyrics so it will be instilled on the audience.
In this type of song it's important to know the point of view of the story, because the perspective will determine what is good and evil and what emotions will be involved.
The least important thing is the rhyme and rhythm and meter, but I always try to get them right, it drastically improves the way the song sounds when performed. Also it forces you to use more interesting vocabulary to fit your meter. Using iambs also improves the flow, though it can be very difficult.
I'd also like to point out that 20 billion songs have used the verse/chorus/verse/chorus/bridge format, please try to get away from this. A song doesnt need a chorus at all, and when it is unnecesary it can ruin the mood of the song. It's important that it is arranged in a way that conveys the emotion, so rather than verses and choruses, start with an exposition and build up to a climax. Eliminate pointless repetition! This format does work for some songs but dont just use the same setup for every single song you write, originality is the key!
HAHA You have the right idea! :>
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to trueOriginally Posted by Stevo42w
Im lucky, I play horror punk so all you really have to sing about is loving a dead chick, killing someone that hurt you, nercrophelia, zombies, and vampires. but the singer in my band is a really good writer heres a verse fron one of our songs. If you thuink it sux you can tell me lol.
In Silence-
Lets run of
past the shadows
noone will find us
so we can be alooone
torchlite chambers
This haunted hollow
theyll search for days but they'll never find our home
What do ya call a drummer whos girlfriend just broke up with him???
Homeless.
I think i like it. Lemme process it for a little longer
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sorry for the double post my first one took forever to show up but it eventually did...
Here is one of the most touching and haunting songs I've heard recently.
It sounds very uplifting but if you read the lyrics and watch the video, well...I'll just say it's the kind of song that you suddenly, beautifully see in a different light.
http://youtube.com/watch?v=7uc-p8fbyEM
Lyrics here;
At home, drawing pictures of mountain tops, with him on top
Lemon yellow sun, arms raised in a V
The dead lay in pools of maroon below
Daddy didn't give attention
To the fact that mommy didn't care
King Jeremy the wicked, oh, ruled his world
Jeremy spoke in class today (2x)
Clearly I remember pickin' on the boy
Seemed a harmless little ~~~~
But we unleashed a lion
Gnashed his teeth and bit the recess lady's breast
How could I forget?
And he hit me with a surprise left
My jaw left hurtin', ooh, dropped wide open
Just like the day, oh, like the day I heard
Daddy didn't give affection
And the boy was something mommy wouldn't wear
King Jeremy the wicked, ruled his world
Jeremy spoke in class today (3x)
Woo (14x)
Try to forget this...try to forget this...
Try to erase this...try to erase this...
From the blackboard...
Jeremy spoke in class today (2x)
Jeremy spoke in, spoke in (2x)
Jeremy spoke in class today
Woo (29x)
Woooooohhh...spoke in, spoke in
Woooooohhh...uh huh, uh huh...
I think the thing you have to understand is this song is an ode of self loathing and paranoia, that ends up consuming this child. In the end, he can't turn to anything, and he just wants to erase himself out of existence. But it's done so artfully that if you don't understand the lyrics it sounds like something completely different.
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