Ok folks, I took all your very helpful advise and this is what I came up with, overall I am very happy with it, and frankly a little proud of myself, I think it turned out pretty darn go for an amateur, anyway have a look/listen and feed me you knowlewdge.

BTW this is not a solo, my playing it just goofing around the kit, basically hitting everything, nothing fancy or cool about it, thanks.

http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fusea...deoid=12176369